LINES: they are not very bold and they don,t stand out as well as they could of.
The lines in the Partern of the ocen are more bold.
COLOUR: are warm and cold they represent all sorts of different feelings.
I could of made the in the background brighter.
TONE: the tone has a lot of mixing colors to make different tapes.
They have dark lines between the colours.
SHAPE: the shapes of it are simple out lines and done easily.
I could have thought up my Owen ideas.
OVERALL: there are a lot of out lines that are covered I think that my art sould have been more souild
I like the colour tone and mixs.